All together now
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randy
Nyssa
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Re: All together now
nice job nysaa. looks really cool. the kid next to the dad reminds me of designs from zelda.
phongshader- Posts : 31
Join date : 2010-02-23
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did u see the mew pic i posted up. how did u like it. let me know cause this time i actually tried to make it in your style
phongshader- Posts : 31
Join date : 2010-02-23
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yes i did, it looks very good, very not you, ;P the only i would say is that is head looks a little small but in general, wonderful
Nyssa- Posts : 76
Join date : 2009-12-16
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oh yea, your head looks a little small
phongshader- Posts : 31
Join date : 2010-02-23
Re: All together now
Open his eyes a tiny bit more like the previous version. Widen the back bottom (green) portion of the hood a little more, maybe to the outer edge of where those vertical stripes run.
randy- Posts : 75
Join date : 2009-12-14
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I agree with randy, widen the hood a little. Also, his chest is protruding a little too much. This is a personal thing, but the white blends in with the green a little too much on the jacket, I think it would look better if the jacket was darkened up a bit or the white was changed to a different color.
Overall, I still like it.
Overall, I still like it.
lawhcha- Posts : 39
Join date : 2009-12-14
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I agree with Randy and Chase. Also, the shape of his face looks a bit compressed from the concept sketch you did before. I think I like him better with the longer face.
It's looking good, though. Good to see things moving towards finalized!
It's looking good, though. Good to see things moving towards finalized!
klamp- Posts : 124
Join date : 2009-12-14
Age : 40
Location : Seattle
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His ear looks pretty weird in the side view. He's stocky, but I think he'd look better chubby. Maybe fuller cheeks and a bit more of a belly from the side view? Fatties always have squinty eyes, too. Just look at Kieran.
randy- Posts : 75
Join date : 2009-12-14
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Last thought: push his hairline forward in the side view. He sorta looks like his hair is receding.
randy- Posts : 75
Join date : 2009-12-14
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randy wrote:His ear looks pretty weird in the side view. He's stocky, but I think he'd look better chubby. Maybe fuller cheeks and a bit more of a belly from the side view? Fatties always have squinty eyes, too. Just look at Kieran.
I don't know how to do fat, like i can't....if anyone want to make him fatter/chubbier be my guest but i will just fail at it lol
Nyssa- Posts : 76
Join date : 2009-12-16
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^ Good to go on the dad, I think!
Fat is hard. I try for cute fat like Russel in Up. I end up with gross fat like Jabba.
Fat is hard. I try for cute fat like Russel in Up. I end up with gross fat like Jabba.
randy- Posts : 75
Join date : 2009-12-14
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cute! he looks a little bit evil. love the idea of exploring characters through interaction.
randy- Posts : 75
Join date : 2009-12-14
could be
i figured it could be harmless or he could be covering her eyes so the others can pelt her with snowballs
haha
haha
Nyssa- Posts : 76
Join date : 2009-12-16
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